a better life will come

October 26, 2007

1.    By stating some shocking facts ,  saying interesting philosophy and just the way he writes.
2.    How they came from a country on to else island then here. He was emphasizing it by showing all the places they saw in the past.


pitch

October 26, 2007

1.     keep it fixed on a target.
2.     So he could branch off into other throws using that one as a bass.
3.     Make a ok hand sigh and rap it around the ball then throw it.
4.     It looks like your going to throw it harder but it takes a longer time to realse it.
5.    Someone who can self teach the self.

Part 2

1.    teach yourself how thing should flow in writing.
2.    A twist in writing that you make up on your own.
3.    To simpily be modest and catch yourself when you fall


ashley

October 26, 2007

1.    Her mood towards those girls that were your everyday American girls and how she didn’t fit in a place witch I think anyone can relate to.
2.     K
3.    she is trying to show how it is not a common name because the company wouldn’t put uncommon names like hers because it wouldn’t sell.
4.    Because she goes back to her home in Nigeria , and sees the roots of her family
5.    discribe the other kids more.